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08 October 2008 @ 01:25 pm
Between Concrete and Sky  
I have a massive issue coming up with titles for stories. Must work on that.

The Avengers. PG-13, Steve/Tony. Around 1100 words. In which Brooklyn (yes, the neighborhood) gets personified and there is, as per usual, coffee.



He’s sitting in the open window, on the sill, one leg tucked up against his body with an arm thrown across his knee, the other gently bumping against the brick of the building in time with the rhythm of the city. The metal of the fire escape feels cool under his toes. He’s got a mug of coffee in his other hand, and steam slowly curls up from the surface of the liquid.

The city pulses below him. He watches people on the sidewalks, people in light jackets, maybe a scarf, fall’s starting to encroach and the mornings are getting cooler. He can see the bus stop at the corner where people are gathered, waiting for the bus, going to work. A young boy runs by right below him, the tails on his hat flopping against his shoulders. A woman rushes after him, and although he can’t hear what she’s saying to the boy, she sounds vaguely harried.

There’s steam rising from manhole covers and out of vents in the buildings, misting and ghosting across brick and steel. He smiles and takes a sip of coffee, enjoys the warmth. He takes a moment to enjoy the heat rising out of the overlarge mug before there are footsteps behind him, and he doesn’t have to turn around to know exactly who they belong to.

“It’s cold. Why in bloody hell do you have the window open?” The voice belonging to the footsteps sounds distinctly annoyed and just a little bit tired.

“It’s cool, not cold.” He corrects and swivels his head to grin at the man behind him. Tony’s obviously stolen some of his clothes, and although the warm-up pants fit fine, the sweater he’s managed to grab is too big through the shoulders and the chest, and it hangs down over his hands, leaving just his fingers poking out. He’s got his arms crossed against his chest, his shoulders hunched. He looks like he may actually be cold.

Steve scoots over in the window and pats the empty sill next to him, which is all the invitation Tony needs to slouch down beside him, curled up on himself. He lets his legs hang out the window.

“I’m gonna need to steal that coffee of yours for a moment.” He smiles at Steve out of the corner of his eye, and Steve laughs, but offers up the mug. Tony practically snatches it and takes a very long drag of coffee before sighing happily. He holds it between his hands, and Steve swears it looks like Tony may actually be caressing the cup. The look on his face is that of pure happiness. It’s amazing what coffee can do to the man.

“You know, you’d be warmer if you put on some socks or shoes. Or both.” Steve points out, retrieving the coffee. Tony wiggles his toes and ignores the comment, although he snatches a pointed look at Steve’s own sockless-feet, before returning his gaze to the city below and around him. They’re four floors up. Tony looks wistfully out to the left, where the monumental skyline that is downtown rises out of the water.

Tony scoots over a bit, melding himself against Steve’s side and letting his head fall sideways on Steve’s shoulder. Steve transfers his coffee to the other hand and slips an arm around Tony, running his fingers over the rough fabric of the sweater.

“You’re not worried about anyone seeing us?” Steve cracks, nudging Tony lightly with his shoulder and grinning. Tony always seems to be paranoid about ending up on the cover of every gossip rag in town. He lost his faceplate battling alien robot Dinosaurs in Central Park last week and just about had a freak-out session right there in the middle of a battle because, as Steve remembers, “Oh my god, you guys, cameraphones.”

“No one’s looking for Tony Fucking Stark in Brooklyn.” Tony snorts. “People don’t realize that I exist in other places besides Midtown and the Upper East Side. I think if someone saw us right now Page Six wouldn’t be having a field day with ‘Tony Stark and Captain America: GAY!’ but rather ‘Tony Stark: spotted OUTSIDE of Manhattan!’”

Steve laughs, he can almost hear the capitalization in Tony’s voice.

“What happens when you stay at the house in Malibu?” Steve teases, brushing some of Tony’s hair out of his eyes. Tony obviously hasn’t seen a brush since he woke up, his hair is an absolute disaster.

“The world ceases to exist, I would assume” Tony replies sagely. “However, people will start noticing if I’m necking with you like a horny teenager in an open window, so can we take this inside so I can abuse various parts of you via my mouth?”

“Oh sure.” Steve says simply and stands up, carefully, he’s smacked his head on the window before, and offers a hand to Tony, who takes some time getting up, he’s still not all the way awake. Tony sneaks what’s left of the coffee before depositing the mug on the windowsill and walking Steve backwards through the loft, which ends with both of them tangled in a splay of limbs and sheets on Steve’s bed.

Steve’s gotten used to how Tony’s mouth feels, how it tastes, how Tony kisses. He tastes like metal and kisses like nothing else in the world matters, that the whole universe has been condensed to only the room he’s in. When he moves and shifts it’s all languid and graceful movements and when his hands tangle in the drawstrings of Steve’s pants, when long fingers trace his waistband, Steve can feel that Tony knows exactly what he wants to do and how he’s going to do it before he’s even started.

Tony had a good idea what Steve kissed like before he’d ever gotten anywhere near his mouth. He was pretty much right. He’s a romantic, you can tell, he’s all consideration and willingness. He moves with power and strength, and yet when he trails his fingertips over Tony’s shoulders, down his sides, he’s nothing but delicate and caring. But when those fingertips are digging into Tony’s hips, rocking and thrusting, they’re rough and hard and that just happens to be exactly what Tony likes.

When they’re curved together, sheets a mess and half off the bed, the cover tossed (mostly) over their legs, they fit. They trade long, lingering kisses and playful pokes and words and listen to the city beat-boxing and breathing outside the window, jazzing and living down on street, in concrete and brick and sky and everything in between.

 
 
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Iris: comic tony[info]hockeyiris on October 8th, 2008 06:20 pm (UTC)
Oh that's beautiful! I love the imagery. I love Tony-stealing-Steve's-coffee stories because he's adorable that way. And of course Steve always lets him. The little switch between Steve's thoughts on Tony and then Tony's thoughts on Steve, then just THEM was lovely. Compare and contrast, but still perfect together.
AtomicSkull[info]atomicskull on October 10th, 2008 02:29 am (UTC)
Thank you! :) I happen to love Tony-stealing-Steve's-coffee stories quite a bit too.
Water at the Bottom of the Ocean[info]juniper200 on October 8th, 2008 06:22 pm (UTC)
That's so sweet. I wish there were more of that kind of morning. :)
AtomicSkull[info]atomicskull on October 10th, 2008 02:29 am (UTC)
Thanks! :)
jess[info]lovelyracketeer on October 8th, 2008 06:35 pm (UTC)
Aww, this is amazing. I love how you've taken one morning out of their lives and used it to define their entire relationship so elegantly. <3

I think the last paragraph is my favorite. It's just a beautifully constructed paragraph.
AtomicSkull[info]atomicskull on October 10th, 2008 02:30 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! :)
caduceus03[info]caduceus03 on October 9th, 2008 12:34 am (UTC)
*huggles Tony* I love all the little details: his stealing the coffee and caressing the cup (speaking as a coffee addict myself, Steve was totally right that Tony was doing that ^_^) and his freakout over cameraphones. For some reason, I find the image of Tony wiggling his toes unbearably adorable and can't get it out of my head...

They're just so sweet together.
AtomicSkull[info]atomicskull on October 10th, 2008 02:33 am (UTC)
Thank you! :)

I have most certainly done some coffee-cup-caressing myself (although now I'm on a tea kick. I've discovered that when I'm uncaffeinated I can actually sit still, haha.) and I may have possibly slightly squeaked in happiness at the image of Tony wiggling his toes.
T: nyc[info]triedunture on October 9th, 2008 02:52 am (UTC)
Yes to Brooklyn-based loving. Thanks for giving Steve's home borough a shout. Just a beautiful slice of life, very lovely.
AtomicSkull[info]atomicskull on October 10th, 2008 02:33 am (UTC)
Thank you! :)
Seanchai[info]seanchai on October 9th, 2008 03:17 am (UTC)
This is such a lovely image. Sitting and listening to the city is such a very Steve thing to do, and Tony coming to cuddle with him (whilst wearing his clothes, no less!) just makes me all warm and fuzzy.
AtomicSkull[info]atomicskull on October 10th, 2008 02:34 am (UTC)
Thank you! :)
jazzypom[info]jazzypom on October 9th, 2008 01:30 pm (UTC)
Awww.. that's a really nice piece
Like, you've stumbled into an intimate moment, and you can't breathe because you don't want to shatter the delicate spun glass of it.

Wow. Nice work.
AtomicSkull[info]atomicskull on October 10th, 2008 02:34 am (UTC)
Re: Awww.. that's a really nice piece
Wow, thanks so much! :)
Classy kinda sassy: [peaces_icons] Sparkles![info]simmysim on October 10th, 2008 12:36 am (UTC)
This feels canon. You've got a lot of touches here that are so true to the characters and their universe and I love love love reading your work cause lol I could really convince myself, I think, that it's not just fanfiction.

“Oh my god, you guys, cameraphones.”

Made me laugh vvv hard. This is warm and lovely, thank you for sharing.
AtomicSkull[info]atomicskull on October 10th, 2008 02:38 am (UTC)
Thank you! :D Man, do I ever wish it was cannon... then we could have "Captain America loves Tony Stark" in addition to "Spider-Man loves Mary Jane". But then the cosmos may explode from the sheer, undiluted cute of having both of those in existence.
CrimsonQuills: Love[info]crimsonquills on October 10th, 2008 05:43 am (UTC)
This was a gorgeous little story. I love the idea of them snuggling in the cold. :-)

Thank you for sharing!
ailette[info]ailette on October 11th, 2008 10:23 pm (UTC)
*snuggles up close to fic* This was lovely! A really nice moment and of course I snickered at Tony's realitionship with the media. :)

Great job! Though I want some hot chocolate or tea or something now. :)
Elspeth: Steve/Tony hearts[info]elspethdixon on October 20th, 2008 02:46 am (UTC)
Eeee! Drink sharing. I love drink sharing! (that this is fluffy, happy, healthy drink-sharing, as opposed to in Tombstone fic, which is where I picked up the kink, just makes it bettter).

They’re four floors up. Tony looks wistfully out to the left, where the monumental skyline that is downtown rises out of the water

And just like that, I knew they were in Steve's warehouse apartment ^_^.

“No one’s looking for Tony Fucking Stark in Brooklyn.” Tony snorts. “People don’t realize that I exist in other places besides Midtown and the Upper East Side. I think if someone saw us right now Page Six wouldn’t be having a field day with ‘Tony Stark and Captain America: GAY!’ but rather ‘Tony Stark: spotted OUTSIDE of Manhattan!’

*grins* What really make this is that it's probably true -- but the New York Post would manage to combine the two "Tony Stark spotted OUTSIDE Manhattan in GAY LOVE NEST!" It might even bump the ongoing saga of That Guy Who Killed His Girlfriend's Cat off the front page. (I wish I were joking. Cat Killer Guy was front page news for two weeks in September -- in the middle of a presidential election, no less).
Alex[info]smilingskull on October 25th, 2008 02:02 am (UTC)
Omg. See, this is why I love the Post. It's made of crazy. I kind of want to track down stuff about this Cat Killer Guy now, haha. In DC we have the Express, which tends to do the same thing. Financial crisis? Meh. President race? Meh. OH MY GOD BEYONCE CHANGED HER NAME! RUN IT!

Btw, you are all sorts of amazing for the "Tony Stark spotted OUTSIDE Manhattan in GAY LOVE NEST!" headline. Totally made me giggle. :D

Thanks for the feedback!
Elspeth[info]elspethdixon on October 30th, 2008 10:26 pm (UTC)
Omg. See, this is why I love the Post. It's made of crazy.

I think the New York Post may actually be the real life inspiration for the Daily Bugle (the front-page layouts even look similar, with all that red and black). The really crazy parts are the comments people leave on the Post's webpage. In my head, Tony totally leaves articles with particularly crazy-right-wing-nutjob comments pulled up on the computer just so that Steve can find them and read them, because watching him rant and snarl and come this close to asking Tony to set up an account for him with the Post so he can go argue with the people who are Wrong on the Internet is just so entertaining.

Steve: "Obama's health plan is not communist! It's socialist! Oh my god, what's wrong with these people?!? How can they not know the difference between communism and socialism?"
Tony: "According to this survey, some political/religious groups in the midwest think Obama is the antichrist."
Steve:"Now you're just making things up to try and bait me."
Tony: "I wish I were. It's almost enough to make me want to vote Democratic just to spite them, and nevermind how much my taxes would go up."